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BUSINESS AND FINANCE: Writing can be a frustrating experience. If you add in sales meetings, deadlines, client consultations, budgets, computer problems, employee issues, and other basics of running a business, there is not a lot of time to create the quality documents you need.
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ESL: If English is your second, third or fourth language, we can proofread your text and check for correct phraseology and idiom usage.
We also work with web designers who need copy written or proofread, edited and/or revised.
BUSINESS DOCUMENTS: Per Diem rates and On Call executive writing services available. Front and back office (technical).
CUSTOMIZED RESUMES: We never use resume templates or boiler plate programs. Your resume is individually prepared and customized to highlight your talents and meet your employment objectives. Chronological, Functional, Combination, Curriculum Vitae
WEB SITE CONTENT: Copy writing, revising or editing in accordance with your marketing plan. We contract with web designers.
John Q. Recentgrad
10 Robin Hood Lane
201-555-0007
201-555-0007 North Bergen, NJ 07417 jgrad@penguin.com
jgrad@penguin.comOBJECTIVEA position in an organization where sales experience, excellent customer satisfaction skills and the ability to lead and motivate a team are needed. EDUCATION MONTCLAIR STATE UNIVERSITY, Montclair, NJ 2005 - 2007 Bachelor of Arts, Political Science & Law. BERGEN COMMUNITY COLLEGE, Paramus, NJ 2003 -2005 Associates Degree, Applied Science, focus in Business Management WORK HISTORYEVENT LEADER/GENERAL FLOOR MANAGER Space Camp USA, Englewood, NJ 2/20/06 - Present •Design and coordinate corporate gatherings, graduations, reunions and other large events (DJ, catering, Dancers, Video games)•Up sell party packages and cross sell amenities and upgrades•Tweak event schedule to maximize profit •Most requested planner/host•Manage floor operations; open and/or close facility daily •Provide guidance in the ordering of video games•Assist in hiring and training of party hosts FLOOR MANAGER/TECHNICAL SERVICE MANAGER/LEAD PARTY HOST Gamescape, Paramus, NJ 8/13/00 – 2/14/06 •Planned, coordinated and hosted large events including business meetings, project graduations and camp reunions•Sold and recommended higher value products to increase revenue•Used excellent customer relationship skills to resolve issues on a timely basis and to client satisfaction•Hired and trained sales staff on all ride operations and trained all technical staff in basic repairs on video game systems and daily ride maintenance •Opened and/or closed facility on a daily basis. •Oversaw all bank set-ups and bank drops•Decided upon new game purchases •Maintained daily repair sheets and ordered service parts•Food preparation-cooking-cleaning (Certified by NJ Health Services)COMPUTER SKILLSIBM-PC, Windows Operating Systems, MS Office (Word, Excel, PowerPoint), Internet, Netscape and Internet Explorer.ACTIVITIESCommunity Service/Paramus Police Reserves •Trained in CERT program for natural disasters to help the community in time of danger on a wide scale basis•CPR certified, minor fire prevention and basic paramedics/ first aid response and treatment•Clothing/Food Drives; Soup Kitchen VisitsWe never use resume templates or boiler plate programs. Your resume is individually prepared and customized to highlight your talents and meet your employment objectives.
HEDGEROW CONSULTING GROUP
September 3, 2008Mr. Paul ConstantineProcyon Networks, Inc.15 Lotor AvenueRidgefield Park, NJ 07888RE: Systems UpgradeDear Mr. Constantine,Thank you for visiting our new office site and reviewing our network specifications. I have received your proposal and given it to the appropriate Regional Managers and IT Supervisory Board for their own independent departmental reviews. We anticipate being able to render a decision within the time frame discussed. If any other considerations should arise as it pertains to the availability of the SCRODMEYER6000 TTY mainframe, kindly notify me at your earliest convenience.Sincerely,Charles E. JonesSVP/Head of OperationsCEJ:jcMBL & ASSOCIATES PRIVATE ADVISORY
Comprehensive forecast modeling, market strategies, forex, bonds, commodities cash-futures,
equities, private /institutional speculates and pension funds
Annual Client Letter and Research Summary
Under Portfolio Management, there are overseeing fees, expressed in a percentage terms based on the market value of combined accounts, individual and/or others such as IRAs, Custodial, Trust, Pension and Profit Sharing and done on a quarterly basis (Quarterly Management Fee). These fees are due prior to the beginning of the quarter itself. The second stipend is a Semiannual Performance Fee, calculated every six months, and can only be recorded providing there are profits resulting from and in excess of trading or growth appreciation from the prior recording period. Upon request, full documentation of Profit & Loss will be provided in hard copy to each client. In certain instances, we are aware some of you require either drawdowns or the use of the monies in your accounts to meet life expenses or in a few cases where distribution is mandated because of age in retirement accounts. We will explain with specificity to each of you below with regard to the percentage attached to both Management and Performance Schedules.The acceptance of retail clients requires considerable alteration to our standard benchmark fee structure as a full-scale management firm, be it in the Hedge Fund Advisory portion of our business or dealing with institutional or large Private Clients, where we are known as outside ‘of counsel’.Until now, dealing with smaller accounts was foreign to us but, due to circumstances outlined below, we have made a conscious decision to handle such accounts and we are in the process of establishing a subsidiary to our main business for this purpose/accommodation. There will be subsequent documents requested, requiring your signature and to be returned to us. Nonetheless, no one has greater passion and compassion to how dear an individual's money is than we. Resulting from your years of hard work and sacrifice, and the collection of savings each of you has achieved, your monies were then abused by your unfortunate alliances with associated brokerage firms during the past four to five years of tumultuous market conditions to say nothing of the outright fraud perpetrated.That is why, particularly during the ‘mending or healing process’ of your portfolios, we have made a conscious decision to keep our fees at far lower percentages than what would be assessed under the Private Client Group where there are certain minimum equity requirements. This fact gives emphasis to our commitment to put clients first so as to take advantage of the prevailing market conditions.We are confident knowing, in the fullness of time, our results will be gratifying and satisfying to all. As your wealth appreciates, so too will the returns to us on those fees. In short, we each are betting on the other and this should make for a long lasting relationship.One of the necessary component demands we insist upon is for all accounts to receive our reports, as voluminous and arduous, as they appear to be at times. But contained within each report is not just our outlook, forecast and comments
about the markets, taking exceptions to the flawed advice that has caused the pain inflicted on investors, but also the
tacit lessons of investing and proper money management. From simple business letters to more detailed industry-specific presentations, we write or refine your correspondence, document or report to maximize its effect.
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